Prepresition poem

Wires
Under the hard drive
Above the graphics card
Through the battery
Around the motherboard
Inside the case
Beyond the eye sight
Onto the screen
Along with the electricity
Connected!

2 thoughts on “Prepresition poem

  1. Love the last line–that one vivid word with its exclamation point is the perfect touch to give life (electricity!) to your poem.

  2. Evan, this is really good! Proud of you… and agree with Mrs. Kriese, and like the way the poem takes you on a journey and builds up to the final word…

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